Been taking photos for about a month now. I was really happy when I got this shot but I don’t have the experience to know if its good or just ok. Would love some feedback.

  • Mikey Mongol A
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    21 year ago

    It is definitely above average. I feel like it would be better without the power lines, but that’s a very minor nitpick. There’s something just a teensy bit off about the composition – I don’t think Candelestine is right about it being “too close” to the rule of 3rds, but they might be right that there’s a better crop and maybe you have to break the rule of 3rds to find it. Still, overall, this is technically sound and a pleasing image. Nice work!

  • @[email protected]
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    11 year ago

    Yes, is cool. I loved what you did with stacking the rectangles in the composition, it almost gives it an illusion of motion despite not being in motion. Main critique is it hews too closely to the rule of 3rds, so feels like a student’s photo.