• @[email protected]
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    22 hours ago

    Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.

    You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?

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      22 hours ago

      Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.

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          210 hours ago

          So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?