@[email protected] to [email protected] • 1 day agoWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zonemessage-square20fedilinkarrow-up1280
arrow-up1280imageWhen people say, "we have made it through worse before" - Clint Smithlemmy.blahaj.zone@[email protected] to [email protected] • 1 day agomessage-square20fedilink
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink2•1 day agoThat formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink5•24 hours agoPoetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink2•edit-222 hours agoSure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO. You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
minus-squareddhlinkfedilink4•edit-222 hours agoSome phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
minus-squareddhlinkfedilink2•10 hours agoSo the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
minus-square@[email protected]linkfedilink1•edit-21 hour agoYeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s Live Laugh Love Level.
That formatting is the worst, cudos to the enormous blanks too, wtf.
Poetry is both the sound and the silence. Without the silence and the breaks, there can’t be any poetry.
Sure, but this is not poetry spaces, it’s just badly cut up text IMO.
You think it is done intentionally? Like some post modernist style?
Some phrases remained intact, while some were abruptly cut off.
Thank you captain obvious.
So the sentence structure reflects the lives of the poem’s subjects, some endure but others are cut short. Is it that obvious?
Yeah, it’s very edgy. What a masterpiece. /s
Live Laugh Love Level.